Aegith's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[z vzcvxcv]

A painfully long, uninteresting, badly...

A painfully long, uninteresting, badly animated stick movie.

The only way you could improve would be to delete this and make something stickless.

[Kissa in english]

Wildly awesome

This is quite possibly the weirdest, but funniest foreign music video i've ever seen. I liked it alot, let's hope you survive the portal. ;]

[ChronoTriggerLegendsEp4]

Improved.

Much, much better than your first submission in this series. If you doublechecked your spelling and made the animation a bit more fluid, you could have a winner in my book.

SquareHard responds:

yea, im trying my best, im still new to flash, so ill get better at this for sure, thx for the review

[Care Bears Messed up]

Awful.

This is terrible. As a rule, flash movies should run at above four frames per second. I think my favorite part of the movie was the part where it faded to black and I never had to watch it again.

["ChopSuey" by SoaD(Demo)]

ergh

it may just be a demo, but technically you're not supposed to submit demos, previews or otherwise unfinished work through the portal. Try NG.MAG's alphas section next time.

The art needs work, but it's animated fairly well (in most places.) The lipsync is a little off too, but perhaps that'll improve.

It's just a demo, but it still sucks.

[ChronoTriggerLegends]

Please try harder.

You need to 1) remove the white from around the sprites, 2) animate them more smoothly, and 3) not submit demos to NG. It says clearly on the submission page that partially completed works are to be submitted to NG.MAG, not the portal.

I could make something like this in half an hour, please put more work into it. If you work hard enough, everyone will praise your art. If you just slap stuff together, everyone will blam you.

SquareHard responds:

ok, go make this in half an hour then, im counting on my watch now, gogo

[Super Smash Allstars p.2]

lame.

This series.... lord, where to start.

There's no plot at all (granted, it's a cross-series matchup, so a plot would be hard to use - but still) and the animation is unspeakably awful.

The dialogue in the first episode is vomit-inducing, and is so full of DBZ-inspired lameness that i nearly didn't watch it through.

Not to mention that he re-used the same lines in the movie. F.I, "What are you?!" was used twice, by the same character TO the same character, as was "how did he get so fast?!"

Thankfully, he no longer uses dialogue, trading it in for some cliched powerchords which nevertheless make the series a little more pallateable.

However, this still leaves the animation (and the laughable splash at the beginning of each scene - looks like it was done in paint) which is of such low, in-a-straight-line quality that I wonder exactly how long each episode takes to make.

BlackDevil, try and invest a little more time into your creations. Making your first couple flash movies -is- a wonderful feeling, but don't release them until they are perfect. You'll get alot more recognition that way.

[YAAFM 9: Michael Moore]

Correction

This is mostly aimed at the idiotic kid who authored the previous post - i'm not sure where he got his statistics, although signs point to "out of his ass."

Bush has done nothing but cut funding to schools, so any educational advantage we may or may not have is not thanks to him.

Not to mention that japan, as a nation, is MUCH smarter than the U.S.

If I may borrow YAAFM's catchphrase - Lord_Log_Demon, you are a fucking moron.

As for the flash, it was most entertaining. Reginold's voice seemed a bit off this time, but it was minor. Perhaps next time you could do one a bit longer.

[Seizure Moutain]

This is unbelievably, utterly awful.

There is no way this could be any worse. Don't view it.